Showing posts with label Descriptive Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Descriptive Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, October 23, 2008

The day I worked at Cirque Du Soliel

One day I was walking down the dark windy street when I saw a stand. I walked over and saw a Music box glowing. I looked at it. Suddenly a dark mysterious man walked out. I asked him how much the box was. He told me that the music box was $5. I checked my pockets. I had only $5 dollars in them. I thought to myself. I should ask what music it plays before i give him all my money.

I asked him what the music box played. "This doesn't play music, If you turn the key three times you will get one wish." said the man. I really would like this I thought. I gave him the money and he handed me the music box. I ran back down the street and towards my home. When I got home I went and hid under my bed. I though what I would like to have as my wish. I thought about many things but the main thing that i would want to do is work in Cirque Du Soliel.

I turned the key three times and it disappeard. Then I heard a car pull up outside. I looked out. I had not seen this car before. Someone got out of the car and ran to the door. I heard a knock and then i heard my name called. I ran down the stairs and my mum told me at they were from Cirque Du Soliel. I got in the car and we drove towards the National Library. When we got there they told me that i had to go on the trapeze without a net.

I got on the trapeze. I swung and my arms started slipping. I fell down and down. I hit the floor hard. When i hit the floor I opened my eyes. It was all a dream.

Thursday, February 21, 2008

When I listen I hear...

When I listen I hear... violins being played by lots of excellent and terrific violinists, the piano playing like a terrific sparkling day, birds that sing in the mysterious distance and my teacher wonderfully singing.


Oh my - you can have a sherbert lemon for that! from Ms.S :)

Wednesday, February 13, 2008

In my teacher's office I found...

What I found in my teacher’s office…

In my teacher’s office I found… a fantastic sparkling magical city filled with little imaginary elves and sparkly flying fairies, my teacher’s small silly cat that loves to chew on her laptop cord that is worth a lot of money and all of the luscious magnificent chocolates that her tall sons have given her.

Friday, December 14, 2007

A day without Zoolatry would be like...


A day without Zoolatry would be like a grey meat eating shark not in the ocean, the blazing hot sun that has fallen from the sky, Pluto lost from the orbit of the Sun or Ms S without her grey laptop.

Thursday, December 13, 2007

When I eat Smores I think of…

When I eat Smores I think off…

A firing hot campfire and people singing around it. Some chocolate, melting in my mouth.A crunchy cracker seeming to be from the sky. Melting Marshmallows that are usually hot when you eat them after they are cooked.

Tuesday, December 11, 2007

I love summer because...

This is my new meme. I tag KFC Rocks and Ms S and Ms C.

1. Do you go to the beach?
Yes I do go to the beach, but only about once a year.

2. Do you have a swimming pool in your back yard?
No I don't, but I really want one.

3. Do you make lemonade?
No I don't, we just buy it from the shops.

4. Do you go to a barbeque?
We don't usually go to a barbeque.

5. Do you run under a hose or sprinkler?
I used to run under it, but now there are water restrictions so I don't.

6. Do you ever sunbake in the sun?
I never have beacause you will get burnt.

7. Do you ever ride your bike in summer?
I don't usually, but I do sometimes.




Bluearth Descriptive Writing

Tail-Tag Rescue

In Tail-Tag Rescue you need to have about twenty people. You need something to use as a tail. You need to have them in two teams a sparkling red team and a shining blue team. You put the tales so they are hanging out of your pants. You need to have a couple of red cones and a couple of blue cones at each end. You need two yellow cones and a lot of green cones to mark out a rectangle. In the middle of each side of green cones you can put the yellow cones on top or instead of the middle cones. Then you can start playing.

If you are on the sparkling red coloured team you start at the end with the red cones and if you are blue you start at the blue end of cones. Someone says go and then you try and grab the other teams tales. If you get the blue teams tale you take it and hold it in your hand while them down to the red cones. The blue team that have been caught have to wait untill someone from there team to get to the red end.



When they get to the end they need to take the captured person from the end to where the yellow cone in the middle. They can run back in from there and start playing again. To win you need to get all the people in the jail or when it ends the team with the least people in jail!









Friday, November 30, 2007

What I found…


When I unwrapped Maggy’s birthday present I found... a golden ring from a mermaid, a trumpet from an orchestra, a trident from under the sea and the Mona Lisa from the Louvre.


In my teacher’s LeSportsac handbag I found... some jewellery from Italy, A lipstick from a very expensive shop, a picture of Giancarlo and Trixie, a rusted piggy-bank that only had 5c in it and some cat hair that had come from Pyewacket.

Tuesday, October 30, 2007

My Camping Trip

My Camping Trip

Once upon a time there was a boy called Brodie. It was nearly his birthday. He went up to his dad and asked if he could go camping for his birthday. His dad said that he could. On the day of his birthday, he packed up some of his clothes, some soft toys and some toilet paper. His dad got all his clothes, the tent and two sleeping bags. He and his dad and ran to the car and drove out to the camping spot near the river.


When they got there they unpacked the tent and set it up. When the tent was set up they put their sleeping bags in the tent. They had brought their swimmers so they decided to go to the river and have a swim. They swam for a half-hour and then they got out. That night they made a camp fire and sang some songs and then went to bed.


When they woke up, they went for a walk. When they got back the whole tent had blown into the river! They dived in and tried to get the tent, but it floated away too fast. They got out and looked around. They saw footprints that looked like bear tracks. They went and followed the tracks. When the tracks ended all they saw was another family camping. They decided to go back to their camping spot. When they got there, they found some luscious, purple berries in a tree, and decided to pick the berries and try one. They were delicious. They picked all the berries in the tree and put them in their bag.



They were about to walk home when they noticed that they had no room for all the other sleeping bags and toilet paper. They decided to put most of the berries back and pack all the toilet paper and sleeping bags. Then they went home and sold the berries outside their house.